IELTS Model Task 2 Essay: Cambridge 7 Question

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ielts model task 2 essay cambridge 7One of the best ways to grow your writing skills is by reading high-scoring IELTS model essays.

Today’s example is for a question in the Cambridge 7 book, Test 1.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The issue of nature versus nurture has hounded humanity for eons. Some are of the opinion that musical and athletic talents are in the genes, while others hold the view that any child can learn these abilities, regardless of their bloodlines. In this essay, I will explore both sides as well as offer my own opinion.

As to those who feel that any child can become a star sportsman or famous musician through training, there is one main justification. The idiom practice makes perfect exists for a reason. Take the Taiwanese sensation Jolin Tsai, for example. At the beginning of her career, she was utterly unable to sing or dance at any level that could be seen as exemplary. However, after years of  training every day with voice coaches and choreographers, she become one of the hottest pop stars not only in Taiwan, but throughout the whole continent of Asia.

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Nevertheless, I believe that it is nigh impossible to excel in sports or music without natural ability. The reason for my view being that nearly every gold medal Olympian and best-selling artist exhibited raw talent  from an early age. Granted, they could not have reached their levels of success without practice and training; however, it cannot be denied that talent existed first. As evidence, every student of human anatomy knows about fast-twitch and slow-twitch muscles. Without being born with a significant amount of the former, winning any 100 meter dash races would be literally impossible.

In sum, I believe in the value of hard work, but I also am realistic about the fact that not just anybody can make millions as a musician or sportsman. I hope that, in the future, every child is allowed to nurture their own natural talents, whatever those may be.

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  • Erinti

    I’ve been listening to your IELTS podcasts for some time. Unfortunately I missed (or maybe it wasn’t even there) what is the most important skill one need to even consider to pass the test. Linking words, phrasal verbs, idioms, synonyms, proverbs and ability to clearly describe one’s opinion mean literally nothing. There one skill that require training to begin with. This is not the ability to scan text for keywords neither knowledge how to use sixteen tenses in English. First and most of all you need to be perfect at .. handwriting. Yes, handwriting and handwriting only goes before any other skills. The British Council clearly failed to notice that 21st century started some time ago, fifteen years to be precise. They noticed the one simple fact that we are living in the computer era neither.

    I took my IELTS exam last Saturday. Notably, I got advantages and disadvantages essay as the Task 2. I’ve heard tips how to approach this particular type of essay earlier today. Don’t get me wrong, I really appreciate your suggestions how to avoid common pitfalls. Unfortunately no one warned me that I need to write my essay using PENCIL on the sheet of paper. In case my handwriting is unclear, I will be given no points. I failed my exam not because I don’t speak English. I failed my exam only due to my poor handwriting. Many professionals are using laptops or other devices in their everyday life. Computers scientists, statisticians and engineers are highly educated professionals with master or PhD degree. They will fail on IELTS only as the result of lack of everyday practice in handwriting. What is then Writing task all about?

    To summarize, I believe for the fairness of all IELTS takers warning need to be added: practice handwriting to begin with. Practice makes perfect. Start with writing essay with a pencil everyday for a month. Once you have as clear and nice handwriting as the best student from an elementary school, time has come to make use of all tips and suggestions by All Earns English.